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Open Poetry #46

Riches

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

0 posted 2010-05-02 06:26 AM

Riches

far from the main road
past the overgrown yard
and abandoned cars
in a small run down shack
on a rickety old single bed,

you kiss me

and I feel like a king.

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

1 posted 2010-05-02 07:56 AM

You have created a wonderful image with this poem. Keep up the good work.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2010-05-02 08:41 AM

Draped in the robes of such a golden thought, who would resist the taste of such complete happiness?

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

3 posted 2010-05-02 11:10 AM

Love is blind... but it sees all that matters. LOL

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

4 posted 2010-05-02 11:31 PM

Thank you very much Earl. I do appreciate the reply.

Z.

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

5 posted 2010-05-02 11:33 PM

who could resist indeed. Trailer park bliss lol.
Thanks for the reply TD.

Z.

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

6 posted 2010-05-02 11:35 PM

yes it does Lassy, yes it does!

thanks

Z

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