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Open Poetry #46
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2010-06-23 10:19 AM

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What a passionate
Firefly that would be—
Taillight in the trees


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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2010-06-23 10:44 AM

Intensely creative.


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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2010-06-23 04:57 PM

beautiful
easy1
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3 posted 2010-06-25 12:23 PM

Very neat. At first I pictured the taillight as stationary, but soon realized better.

In honor of your title here: http://haikuguy.com/issa/
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