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Open Poetry #46

flat foot thump

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2010-07-13 03:00 AM

last night

laugh light

I tossed the gravel-white

pebbles at your door

last night

I cried

you lied, to comfort her:

"See this woman's stalking me--
let me make a clean break, please..."

a towel swathed your loins, Ghandi.
I heard the rhythm of your feet
dance the steps in spiraling:

a-king

ka-chung

and flat foot thump--

slow

complacency

and lust

re-adjusted

commandjutant;

'She goes to work at four'

whispered

through the keyhold of the door

which keeps my palmprint

like the sore

that's never gonna heal.

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2010-07-13 06:21 AM

Love how this rolls over the tongue.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2010-07-13 09:15 AM

reads well ma'am...your talent for the rythmic use of words and the imagery you paint, always has been a source of envy for me...

I look forward to each new read

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2010-07-13 10:53 AM

kewl stuff kbomb...I have an extra bat if you wanna borrow it..

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