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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Rain falls away. Thunder rumbles good-bye--- green twilit sky. |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
I do love the consice nature of haikus style poems, you really end up with the essence of something. I think this is a perfect example of that. - anya |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can't say I've ever seen a green sky...but wow! I'd love that! Nice write here! |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Nice one, easy.. quite evocative of the wet-washed moments just after a big storm.. enjoyed  ~Amaryllis |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
original and colored write, I enjoyed regards yann |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I remember the greenlit skies after a storm.. nicely done.. concise as the form allows, and descriptive. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the colors and how the sky evolves and drifts in slow motion. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Nicely done here. It is interesting that in the Japanese language there is a word `ao` that can mean green or blue. A blue sky can be `ao` as well as a green traffic signal. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Thanks to all for your kind words, and, yes, it is sort of a greenish blue. We get that after thundershowers down here sometimes, and I've seen it near sunset after winter storms up north, too. |
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