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Jealousy / High Art
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Jealousy / High Art |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Jealousy is not required on such a fine day at the overlook. **** We dance as High Art. Spirits made flesh we are. The Creator smiles. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
NICE! |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Two interesting and well written haiku, although I am not quite sure if there is any connection between the two. While I prefer traditional haiku, I must admit that splitting a sentence and making the syllable count fit would be extremely difficult. Hats off to you. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Very well said, the both.. especially enjoying the second one  ~Amaryllis |
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