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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2010-09-15 10:28 AM

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September

September—

The back of a cat
Turning a corner


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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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1 posted 2010-09-17 02:47 AM

Stark and intuitive. Catches the (sometimes) graceful and fleeting turning of the seasons, in a perhaps at-first-glance unlikely image, or rather a swift, succinct set of images.
Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
2 posted 2010-09-17 01:04 PM

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Thank you

When I read it myself I like it
better than before.  It captures a
moment in the month for remembering
it all.  Glad that cat went slowly by . . .

Thanks again

John

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