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The Whiney Early Morning Poem
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The Whiney Early Morning Poem |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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It’s too damn early For self-indulgent poetry I hope the moose in my yard Eat all the fall weeds My dogs keep barking The cats pushed me out of bed I can’t sleep And it’s too damn early For self-indulgent poetry - Alison |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
LOL! It is never to early for a smile! Thanks Alison, that sweetened my coffee! ebm |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) you may whine anytime you wish ma'am... some mornings get off to less than desirable start... enjoyed your morning "whine" |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you for smiling through my whine with me. I toast you both with coffee! A |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey! I wanna write one like this! I've been up since 1:00 a.m....CST! Now THAT's TDE!!! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I'm still thinking about the moose in the front yard... lol.. I have deer and occaisionally bear, but a moose might might make me give up drinking.... |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
LOL~ love it~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
You can whine any time, dear Alison, but please forgive me should a smile crease my face as it has now done. I guess it's not so much what we do as how we do it and your whine has been very well done. Helen |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Hahaha. Whining can be the best thing to do when you want to let out something. I do that once in a while. Yet your was funny and well served in a poem...even if it's too early for poetry.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, those cats are mischievous in the early morning hours, I know. Need no alarm clock! Love the thought of the moose eating the fall weed, good girl! I can relate, it's always too early ... Enjoyed your take on it, dear Alison. I am sure after the coffee the day took off nicely! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so vivid, so natural, this is exactly the essence of poetry, about events of any kind , a dog, a cat....an excellent poem Alison regards yann |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ali-san...I called the waaaaambulance and they are on their way to assist. (grin) There was a block party last night where I live and someone left a sweater on the porch....hope they come back and get her before she wakes up. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I`ll keep it short. Loved this! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'll join you in glass of whine any day, Alison! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is so true to life. My life at least. Morning always comes too early for an insomniac like me. Ida |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I love your too damn early poetry Alison! made me laugh! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Hehe ... what a great piece of writing. Loved your whining!!! ooxx Marti
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Hehe ... what a great piece of writing. Loved your whining!!! ooxx Marti
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