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Open Poetry #46

October

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2010-10-18 01:26 PM

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Autumn—

High up
On a leafless branch
A robin calls

Autumn—

In fading light
The white house silent

Autumn—

Blue sky—
Beyond North Green Bay
Distant maples

Autumn—

Above the changing willow
A snowy moon

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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2010-10-18 11:20 PM

Hmmm....

Is there a political overtone [undertone?] here?

Enjoyed, John. Thank you!

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-10-19 09:36 AM

I love the simple stark imagery here. ebm

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2010-10-26 06:14 PM

nice!

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2010-10-31 03:10 PM

beautiful

yann

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2010-10-31 03:14 PM

Perfectly brilliant in every way!!

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

6 posted 2010-10-31 05:37 PM

Yep. I read political overtones here also. Nice work.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

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