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Open Poetry #46

haiku on a hidden forest

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2010-11-09 05:29 PM

somewhere in a child
there is a hidden forest
that is not tainted

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2010-11-09 05:40 PM

and the child will cling
forever to that forest
seeking love and hugs

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

2 posted 2010-11-09 06:09 PM

And the well-tended forest grew with the child... I still have mine

I liked this.
.
Best~
Amaryllis

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

3 posted 2010-11-09 06:10 PM

A very gooo haiku.

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

4 posted 2010-11-09 07:44 PM

Always happy to read haiku and this one has something deep to say. Thanks!

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

5 posted 2010-11-10 05:56 PM

To
Jerry Pat: thanks for the comment and haiku.
Amaryllis: thanks for reading and commenting
Easy1: happy that you loved the haiku
Bastet: glad you enjoyed it

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