Open Poetry #46 |
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The Struggle |
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gdcod3player Member
since 2009-09-13
Posts 70California |
The heart you broke is in a sad place The shot that tore me apart was found In the bed that i was told showed our love You were someone i loved, can that be replaced? You moved on within the day, while i laid wide awake Look at what you have done to me The girl i love has pulled away without a good bye I have never felt a knife cut so deep The blood stain doesnt lie Can i doubt what i love? You slammed my soul into the grave You have left me lonely Please let me find a girl that can love me again Can i be sure what she felt or was it a dream? My heart is broken in two pieces One left for someone new, and one left for you Can i pick one now? The girl of my dreams is slipping through my life There is nothing i can do She isnt interested in what i have been waiting for You have my heart, but can it take anymore? The death that has haunted it for so long beats it into the ground Dont let me go away defeated Bring me back to loving you!!!!! P.S. this has several meanings to me... |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I like this. quote: A heart that is shattered, but holds bits and pieces of those one has loved- is truly an amazing one. -Trina. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
We have to mourn love's death for a period, and then, as you say use what is left of your heart to move on. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(!$! |
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