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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Can't swim against the current Try as you might you'll lose Tire your muscles and slowly give in Thus is how adult life shall begin Disappointment matched with memories of a passed life Sit back and enjoy the tension, cut it with a knife Just to pass the time just buying your time Never knowing why Never knowing why Nothing goes your way Try as you might You'll always lose Fighting against a current Feel yourself drowning Grasp a hold of a hand Just to slip Let it go Breath in Real slow And Float. "Everything has its beauty but not everyone sees it." |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Perhaps I am mistaken but I interpreted this piece as a struggle with adolescent angst. I think most of us have to go through this difficult period but saying so does not make it easy. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. |
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