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Open Poetry #46

A Bad Situation

ILoveTheRain
Member

since 2008-03-02

Posts 157
GA

0 posted 2010-12-22 02:24 AM

Ripping through the trust you gave
Tearing it into pieces of lies
I throw myself into the ground
Wondering if there is a way to fly

Fearful of being alone once more
I cannot continue the path I choose
For there is never a way to cover a lie
Forever, you will always lose

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2010-12-22 10:55 AM

Lies. Some people will run ten miles to tell a lie when they could stay put and tell the truth.

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2010-12-22 10:59 AM

Good write girls, I'm really liking your style.

Lori

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2010-12-27 09:29 PM

enjoyed...james

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

4 posted 2010-12-28 07:41 AM

Melancholy, and beautiful all at once.

·´~`·»Brett«·´~`·

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2010-12-28 10:02 AM

Some people will lie when the truth's better.

Love the powerful ending.

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

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