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Donde es Amo?
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Donde es Amo? |
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irmirt Junior Member
since 2010-06-09
Posts 18 |
Donde es Amo? (Where is love?) It could be in a whisper, Of a private things I've heard I sift and sort the message, As I replay each word. Maybe hid within a glance. A picture painted sweet, Imagery’s excitement, Reality… Retreat! Possibly a magic touch, Warmed embers in my soul, I now begin to hunger, For what can make me whole. I question if I’m in the thoughts, But I’m afraid to know. There is a chance instead you see, My dream would have to go. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Oh I understand...I can remember the sitting and re-playing each word! Lol Best wishes for the ending you seek  A |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Very well written about being smitten! Lori |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Aw, sometimes the anticipation is far better than the reality. but then again, how are we to know unless we venture into the lions den of amour. To mimic is a form of praise unless |
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irmirt Junior Member
since 2010-06-09
Posts 18 |
Jerry, "anticipation" puts me in mind of Paul Simon's "Kodachrome", ...I know they'd never match my sweet imagination... Thanks for your comments. |
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