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Open Poetry #46
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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
0 posted 2010-02-27 02:36 PM

Spring Cleaning

I had never thought that
Beneath layers of shattered glass
and scattered pieces of dreams
Left behind by priorities
and obligation
That joy
Lives  

[This message has been edited by Juju (02-27-2010 05:31 PM).]
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2010-02-28 11:44 AM

Juju, these words bloom with charm and truth.

Love,
Margherita
gilead
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since 2008-03-10
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nevada, USA
2 posted 2010-02-28 12:43 PM

Priorities and obligations, so often belies  contentment and joy; you have wisely put it all into perspective in a lovely way---enjoyed,

Art
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