Winter Rain (double cinquain)

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Open Poetry #46

Winter Rain (double cinquain)

Laverne Pacquire
Member

since 2009-11-15

Posts 96

0 posted 2010-03-01 11:31 AM

brisk
winter rain
in summer refrain
bells cling and cower
rain

rain
high above
in trinity sky
way up high, falling
today

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

1 posted 2010-03-01 11:53 AM

Hi Laverne, I was listening to an NPR broadcast last evening: "Liquid Bells", and your reference to bells and rain, caught my ear and eye. This is a lovely poem, soothing to the heart. Great work!

Regards---

Art

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2010-03-01 12:21 PM

Very nicely done.

Love,
Margherita

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2010-03-01 10:43 PM

Laverne Pacquire - has the feel of real to the words, enjoyed...

BC

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