And the Stars like Diamonds…

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Open Poetry #46

And the Stars like Diamonds…

Father
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since 2009-12-15

Posts 58
Confusion

0 posted 2010-01-07 10:10 PM

‘Neath the blanket of night
I lay staring at the stars

How bright in the cold air;
How lonely seems the sky.

Breathing deep, I think of you;
And remember.

DonRodrigue
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since 2010-01-07

Posts 5

1 posted 2010-01-07 10:14 PM

Short, the use of the words were really moving. Thanks.

Father
Member

since 2009-12-15

Posts 58
Confusion

2 posted 2010-02-03 06:18 PM

Thank you DonRodrigue, I tried to paint the largest picture possible with the fewest words while retaining the emotional impact as well.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2010-03-15 11:37 PM

Short, yet to the point and most effective....beautiful and very powerful!

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