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Inspired-8
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Pluto
0 posted 2010-03-06 03:36 PM


Benevolent darkness
Breathing dares
Slipping cognizance
Soon disappears

Intricate feelings
Revealing slight
Shadows convening
Prevailing night

Voices echo
Dubious harmonize
Dark’s compose
Silence replies

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2010-03-07 08:45 AM

Dear Victor, this is an excellent poem, though it conveys melancholy.

Love,
Margherita
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