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Open Poetry #46

haiku

ateague38
Junior Member

since 2010-03-25

Posts 13

0 posted 2010-04-01 02:05 AM

something is missing..
your soothing touch eludes me
one can only hope.

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

1 posted 2010-04-01 02:06 AM

I like haiku and this one is good.

ateague38
Junior Member

since 2010-03-25

Posts 13

2 posted 2010-04-01 02:18 AM

well hey thanks. loves lost are an endless supply of poetry material i suppose.lol

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

3 posted 2010-04-01 03:45 PM

An haiku more appropriate for me in my younger years

Something is missing
My front tooth is displaced
Too much soothing touch

Yours is better : D

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2010-04-01 04:02 PM

Well done.
Ida

ateague38
Junior Member

since 2010-03-25

Posts 13

5 posted 2010-04-01 06:32 PM

haha much thanks to the both of you.haiku's aren't normally my thing...but i figured a couple couldn't hurt

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