I Want To Kiss You Once Before I Die

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Open Poetry #46

I Want To Kiss You Once Before I Die

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2010-04-03 05:36 AM

Everchanging, but we remain,
as the world turns in time,
you and I, our hearts the same,
seasons come and go, I find you,
my lovely Ghost of true love,
when the winds blow no more,
I will come to you swiftly,
Love will make its way,
with years of deep dreams,
stacked with desires and wishes,
one moment of a thousand thoughts,
will touch your lips,
the world will explode,
my lips touch yours,
I die in your arms,
my heart filled with bliss.

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

1 posted 2010-04-03 10:18 AM

very sensual and beautiful write.

Z.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2010-04-05 12:34 PM

Fantastic...how could one be happy with just one kiss...James

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

3 posted 2010-04-05 08:29 AM

This is probably my favorite of yours, out of a long list of romantic classics. I love this one.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2010-04-06 02:47 PM

lovely write...this line is simply amazing:

"one moment of a thousand thoughts,
will touch your lips"...and one's breath is swept away...beautiful

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