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A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
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Open Poetry #48
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2012-06-14 07:57 PM

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In a cabin kitchen
Baking salmon

You whom I had had
In bed that morning
And would again
The morning after

With your long blond hair
Moans and groans
Urging me on

And I understood
In what we agreed
Was Paradise Michigan


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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2012-06-14 08:05 PM

The vision of this poem is hot in so many ways...the fact that I love salmon (actually any fish) only added flavor...The cabin is a wonderful touch...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*
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