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Open Poetry #48

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Freely_expressing
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since 2008-10-16

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NSW, Australia

0 posted 2012-08-09 10:30 PM

Loose terminology
Often misconstrued
Vows to last eternally
Ending rather soon

Startime1955
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1 posted 2012-08-09 11:21 PM

This poem sure says the way it often is...well done...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Freely_expressing
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2 posted 2012-08-10 01:38 AM

I think it stemmed from my musings on the way love has been so...diluted by modern society

Freely_expressing
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3 posted 2012-08-10 01:39 AM

Hence the cynical air.
Thanks

I'm glad you enjoyed it

Margherita
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Eternity

4 posted 2012-08-10 02:00 AM

Very good acrostic. LOVE in "capital letters" IS, but so often we associate it essentially with the exclusive emotions we feel for another. While it lasts it is eternal

Margherita

Freely_expressing
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5 posted 2012-08-10 02:36 AM

I agree! It is that kind of understanding of love that causes it to be not so eternal I think.
Thanks for commenting

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-08-10 07:11 AM

Lasting forever means, wait, let me consult my lawyer.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Freely_expressing
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7 posted 2012-08-10 08:35 PM

Haha, indeed.

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