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Open Poetry #48

Disturb.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2012-09-27 07:53 PM

Ragged,descended blackness
on rich plough land.
Escape from you is futile
necromantic dream master.
Buoyant in my head,you
rasp me awake into
moon shaded night, darker
than your soft wings.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2012-09-27 09:04 PM

Sounds like a very bad nightmare! Nicely done.
Kat >^..^<

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2012-09-28 10:10 AM

Buoyant in my head,you
rasp me awake into
moon shaded night, darker
than your soft wings

Your title is perfect... this takes my breath! *S*

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-09-28 10:51 AM

WOW...so very powerful...wonderful writing...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2012-09-29 01:39 PM

fine writing (as is rather typical of you) !

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2012-09-30 07:01 PM

Yep!! Had me tossing and turning, and feeling just a little fitful!!

Always happy to find you here, Goldenrose~

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