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Autumn (haiku)
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Autumn (haiku) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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colorful season fierce canvas of red and gold fresh wind blows leafs off |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful imagery, dear Charisma! Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Awww yes, Autumn is in the air and it is indeed a lovely time of year. Good to read you!! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You turned nature's tapestry back and gave us an excellent view. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I love the beautiful colors of autumn...your words bring it to life...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Awesome Autumn! Enjoyed. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved it my friend. I could be wrong but I believe "leaves" would be a better choice than "leafs" and still be one syllable. j. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
jwesley: thank you for "leaves". had wrote that at first, but my non english mind had changed it my friend.  thanks to all for the nice replies  |
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