| Open Poetry #48 |
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Dare I ? |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Dare I speak of heaven light in laughing eyes love-full hearts to leaven promise borne on sighs? Caught up on a kiss or two bliss and teardrops shoal songs to sing horizons blue arms to make me whole. In timeless twists so clever I shall sail cosmic streams embrace you now, forever in your sweetest dream of dreams. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
beautifully written, what a gorgeous write ![]() Love is the life of the soul... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Ms.Lassey Compacted bliss..you just have to love it. enjoyed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In timeless twists so clever I shall sail cosmic streams Yes! Dear Karen, this is overwhelming in its blissful energy and poetic rendering. Margherita ![]() |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so gorgeous, thanks yann |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
What a very cool write about the Heavenly bliss of love and its tributaries. Wonderful job! ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Nice! So soft, so packed with thought. Ms. E |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
4:00 A.M. Sleepless and not feeling well, but appreciate you all for reading and leaving such pleasant comments here. You are my Valentines, all. ~Karen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sorry to hear you did not feel well in the night hours, dear Karen, maybe you can have a nap in the afternoon to reintegrate the sleep pensum! Have a beautiful Sunday! Margherita |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Margherita. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Dare you not - my friend, share such things with us...much enjoyed this...share some more... j. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Y E S !!! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Humpty Dumpty swoon!It's true, my poet friends, the shortest distance is a smile. It's good for what ails me. [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (02-13-2012 04:03 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms KL...only you could do this..enjoyed you. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Daark, Hope the rest of your day has been enjoyable, too. ![]() |
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