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Open Poetry #48

Roaming

Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

0 posted 2013-01-25 06:50 PM

I want to fill my life with what's outside-
Outside my room, outside the window's glass
I want to roam the world where I reside
and take in all the knowledge that I pass
I want to learn with bare feet on the grass.

-Amber

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-01-25 06:53 PM

Ahh, that last line brought on a big smile from me. Two poems both seeking knowledge. I have a feeling you already have much and the sky is the limit to what you can achieve.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2013-01-25 07:30 PM

Well.... step away from the keyboard, get outside, and roam, roam, roam...
Nice write, I'm hoping you get plenty
of vitamin D.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2013-01-26 09:49 AM

This is quite a visual little poem. Well done!

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