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Open Poetry #48

Cupid

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2013-02-09 08:27 PM

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Lifting up
My heart
From yet another
Near fatal mistake
I looked at him
For some response

What do you expect
My foolish Arthurian
Romantic knight

After all
I’m just a child

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Duck1946
Member

since 2011-05-16

Posts 84
Nebraska

1 posted 2013-02-13 11:21 AM

Great stuff!
Deep filled with mystery.
How do you do it?

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2013-02-13 12:02 PM

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Thank you

I'm not creative
merely responsive

My best talent
is not letting my self
get in the way

Thanks again

John

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OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

3 posted 2013-02-13 04:03 PM

I child he may be, but the right arrow can change your life forever. Thank you for this, I enjoyed it.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

4 posted 2013-02-13 07:51 PM

Cute poem, enjoyed.
Kat >^..^<

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