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Open Poetry #48

Heart Echo.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2013-09-02 03:56 PM

Love beauty has faded
in me now,blasted
by withering life winds
leaving only a craggy,
dusty,hard granite heart.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-09-02 05:28 PM

Short and decidedly straight to the point. I really like that.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2013-09-02 07:56 PM

The echo of what was I suppose. As we get older the heart grows fonder of those memories of love.

Always good to read you GR.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

3 posted 2013-09-03 02:20 AM

But even a hard granite heart continues to beat. Enjoyed.

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

4 posted 2013-09-07 08:31 AM

craggy and dusty do not belong in the heart

to better times

, softer hearts shall prevail

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2013-09-07 04:21 PM

... likely and all-too-common fate of 'incurable Romantics' ...

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2013-09-07 10:01 PM

Life does tend to beat us up sometimes, Phil.
Well said.
Ida

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