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Open Poetry #48

Our Music.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2013-09-12 08:13 AM

I never know
what we discuss
as I watch you speak
and hear your thoughts
I get lost
in our adagio
I love the sound
of you listening
as my heart
reverberates yours

this homophony is beautiful
the music our love makes

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

1 posted 2013-09-12 08:38 AM

very vivid and brings the reader into your world

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-09-12 08:46 AM

This sounds like a fairyland love, Trina. Make it last.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

3 posted 2013-09-12 09:16 AM

Thanx Emma.
Ah, it is just a "fairyland love".....If I do find a love such as this - I will make it last. Thanx for looking in Jerry.

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

poetically ghetto
Member

since 2004-01-20

Posts 100

4 posted 2013-09-12 05:46 PM

what a smooth way of setting a tone could actually feel the emotion

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2013-09-13 11:16 PM

Felt real to me too! Way to go girlie, nailed it!

Lori

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 2013-09-14 02:40 PM

Ah, lovely depictions. Much enjoyed.

Michael

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