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Open Poetry #48

When Fire Hits Clay

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2013-09-22 12:40 PM

Fed on passion's touch

Kundalini serpent spins

Coils on hungry soul

©2013 by icebox

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2013-09-22 03:21 PM

Wow! Awesome little write, Mr. Ice.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2013-09-25 07:05 AM

Awesome is right!

Margherita

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

3 posted 2013-09-25 11:07 AM

Thank you for the kind touch of your thoughts.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2013-09-26 03:56 AM

To the point and absolutely true. I think that serpent is to blame for a lot of mayhem in the world. Time to kill it or at least disarm it.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2013-09-26 06:49 AM

Very cool Haiku!

~L

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