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Open Poetry #48

Oceans Edge

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2013-09-30 10:58 AM

Oceans Edge
Take me to the oceans edge
where salty air
cleans my head
where thunderouse noise
of tide and wave
calls to me
when having a bad day
To sit and look
toes playing in the sand
I can feel and see
the real of Gods hand
and believe again
in this to shall pass
for love in life
is what shall last

By
Connie McDonald
Copyright@2002

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2013-09-30 04:57 PM

I too, find the ocean to be a place that speaks to me in this way. I love the way you captured this Connie, thank you for this lovely reminder.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2013-10-01 06:11 PM

Very true and well said.

Margherita

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2013-10-05 08:38 PM

I really like the feel of this

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

4 posted 2013-10-06 06:58 AM

Love this poem!
I would like to see the ocean, but as yet I saw it only in films.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2013-10-14 06:22 PM

very nice...James

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