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Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2013-10-09 11:58 PM

Dried leaves rattled and rolled
Across the rain-soaked yard
Until they rested on blades of browned grass

Lit like amber by lingering rays of autumn sunlight
They flitted in place
Reminding me of birds with broken wings

-

Alison

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2013-10-10 06:06 AM

lovely thoughts as I think about so many today~~

M

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2013-10-10 09:49 AM

You made me shiver inside with these touchingly beautiful words. Such poignant imagery. John will be moved too up there ...

Love,
Margherita

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2013-10-10 11:59 AM

Tears fill my eyes at both the beauty of your words and the reason for the writing. Thank you for this, sweet lady.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2013-10-10 01:04 PM

excellent writing !! ...

what happened to John that I don't know about?!!

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

5 posted 2013-10-10 06:12 PM

Beautiful poem!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2013-10-10 07:27 PM

Outstanding piece, my friend.

j.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2013-10-10 08:48 PM

This is so appropriate for John. Beautiful.
Ida

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2013-10-11 02:31 AM

Alison, I have no words. Just that you revered John so beautifully, entering his very soul and blended your words with his.

Tears
Owl

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2013-10-11 11:20 PM

Thank you all. I know we will not fill the hole that John has left here.

A

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2013-10-22 10:15 PM

enjoyed...James

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

11 posted 2013-11-02 08:52 PM

there are rather too many now ... that no longer walk the fine blue sands of 'P.I.P.-land' by the cyber-sea. All those fine poets are grandly missed!

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