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Open Poetry #48

The Gavel of God

KentAshbyKorb
Member

since 2013-05-05

Posts 99
Nc USA

0 posted 2013-11-27 10:37 PM

A face full of ashes
A mouth full of gravel
A tongue tied and twisted
The rubble of babel
And ruins of waisted
Worn, wisdom-less passions
A warning. God fisted
His grip on his Gavel
And watch as he whisks
This misplaced place and dashes
This world into pieces!
You watch as it crashes!

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

1 posted 2013-11-28 08:21 PM

Well written,
but it's a sad script!
Maybe something will remain?
Not everything is wrong on the earth.
Not everything is wrong with mankind yet.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 2013-11-30 05:11 PM

God certainly has more patience than I with his creation. Gale is right though, there is much beauty in the world still, if only one is willing to still see it.

Michael

KentAshbyKorb
Member

since 2013-05-05

Posts 99
Nc USA

3 posted 2013-11-30 05:39 PM

I agree with you both! There is still much good on this planet. I also believe that the earth will remain. I don't however think that judgment is far off for all of humanities course abuses.

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