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Open Poetry #48
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Edgewise
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since 2008-03-23
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0 posted 2013-11-24 11:28 PM

My jacket leaks feathers
that dance in ways I fathom,
meandering like sprites
or supernaturally suspended.

My jacket freely spills its guts.
Others burden my attention.
Distracted, they swat a feather,
so I keep the holes unmended.


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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2014-01-11 10:20 PM

A floating feather is irresistible, though for me, to catch one is more fun than to swat at it repeatedly.

I must find this jacket of yours. This infernal solitaire is driving me mad.  

...just bein' Bluesy
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