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Open Poetry #48

in sadness ...

chickoo007
Member

since 2007-11-06

Posts 70
India

0 posted 2012-03-12 04:28 PM

I see myself sad and alone.
Lost the only way back home.
Searching through my memories,
So vulnerable , so error prone.

I catch a tear rolling down my eye.
The more I think , the more I cry.
On a ship stuck in the sands of time,
Each wave of hope is just a lie.

An empty life in dreams abounds...
Yearning to hear a concerned sound,
A man bereft of company,
I lost it all that I had found ...

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-03-12 04:34 PM

Sorry to hear the sadness in this poem, but I remember when sadness was in my poetry too. Now I write of love, for love has finally found me. It is never too late, I should know, I am seventy-three next month.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2012-03-12 09:54 PM

oh my... I could have written this tonight. You have written my thoughts.. with eloquence I might add

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