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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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There are those times and places that only you know what they do to me You play a symphony of sensations deep into the flesh of me Your murmur words explode within the burning of me My crescendo lasts forever dripping the ecstasy of me LGR(C)3/20/12 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Good morning, Lori. I have to say, you are expert at knowing how to arrange words for their maximum effect. This one is a perfect example. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Goodmorning! Thank you my friend. Lori  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Jerry, she does that very well.  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Karilea, for backing me up. lol. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
What???? is tha all???? It's like, I wanted to go on reading sighing and reading and sighing and murmuring What passionate sensations and fantasy you words evoke Lori the Goose Girl Dear!!!!!I will have to stop reading Pip for now ... but just for today. xoxoxo I mean honk honk and to all a good night. Jaime |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Yikes... this one nearly melted my cell phone screen. Maximum effect indeed. Michael |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
DO NOT DISTUBR Lori, because she is lost in extatic extacy!! Much murrmurs Lori! Melt Murmurs Lori! Hugs and mumbled murmurs Lori! :----Jaime----) |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
well... where's my smelling salts... I feel a swoon coming on!! lol. Very moving, wonderfully written |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
... Makes me giggle each time I read this! Jaime |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Michael, sorry about the cell phone LOL Lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
thanks Sunshine! Lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Tracey hang in there and take a deep breath Lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sweet Daddy you are really being goosey over this one silly goose Lori |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow...  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
You got it going on, makes me smile, Ms. E |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
*gulp!* LOL... And to think... mere moments ago I was thinking the AC was too cold in here! LOL You certainly warmed things up in a hurry! |
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