| Open Poetry #48 |
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Sonograph Translation |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa
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SONOGRAPH TRANSLATION 23 March 2012 Amidst cacophonous supermarket chatter, velvet notes hummed softly by a musing cashier melted the chocolate of my thoughts and I drove home in a dream capsule and painted the swirled textured timbre into the colours of this poem. Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"melted the chocolate of my thoughts." Great line. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, Ida. Glad you liked it. Owl |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I love the bits and pieces of a normal day when they are put to prose explantions of what seems mundane... I hear Dr. Williams in this. A cashier humming, turns into melted chocolate.. It doesn't get better than that...:-) Applause! "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Ford. Yes, Dr Williams, a favourite of both us, indeed. I love your new signature - now THAT doesn't get better than that either! Owl |
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