| Open Poetry #48 |
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Abandoned Dream |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows
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blank spots on a wall clearing vacant memories dust in empty wind ©2012 icebox |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Great thoughts, inspiring imagery, dear Charly! Memories resist: allergic minds react fast to dust in the wind Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
wind collecting dust eventually turns to sludge a canvas of mud *Sorry Ice, I just had to do it. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Karen checks her mail sadder with each passing day Charly's gone away. ![]() I suck But I miss you! (Oh c'mon, that's gotta be in the top ten list of your poem replies.) ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Empty rooms, empty wombs... harsh reality remembers. ![]() |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I won't even try. Can't touch this. Ida |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Spring cleaning: out with the old and in with the new. Enjoyed. JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Poignant haiku.....love the last line~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed. It |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Thank you all. c. |
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