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Laughter Lines |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England 
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LAUGHTER LINES Looking in the mirror, shaving as you do A faint red line of blood appeared Just a drop or two I'd knicked a little laughter line Just beneath my eye Don't you dare say wrinkle Unless you want to die I wondered 'bout the laughter line Cos sometimes I have cried Reflection in the mirror Is this the one I feared? But I will keep on laughing What else can you do And I will keep on smiling Making wrinkles, just for you |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Cute. Humorous and very readable. Since I went the electric razor many years back, I don't get that laugh nick anymore. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Too bad those lines always seem to look better on the guys than the gals. I really enjoyed this. Lori  |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
Hi Jerry, yes and gone are the days of the cut throat. Lori, I am too much of a gentleman to comment |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Made me smile. It's cute. Margherita |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... you've dressed reality in a robe of whimsy... and if your lady didn't place a kiss on that laugh line made just for her, she should have! |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
This poem is a joy to read...it brought a smile to my face...*HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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