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Open Poetry #48

Life On The Run

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2012-04-21 01:53 PM

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poetry blossoms

muse threatens abandonment

flower petals drift

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©2012 by icebox

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-04-21 01:55 PM

When the muse is becoming quiet I have noticed the drifting of the flower petals myself, Ice. They will return. In force.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

2 posted 2012-04-21 03:29 PM

"Flower petals drift"

With tiny seeds attached
They seek new earth to sow
Into a rarer beauty

Enjoyed your poem,
Ms. E

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2012-04-21 04:30 PM

Wow! I like that, Edna. I think she's right, Mr. Ice. My muse is finally returning from vacation. I didn't get anything nearly as clever as this from her for quite a while.
Ida

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (04-22-2012 12:11 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2012-04-22 06:53 AM

The muse will stay, as you created this fantastic imagery to signal your fear of her absence.

Love also Ebonygirl's reply ...

Margherita

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