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Open Poetry #49
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EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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Midwest
0 posted 2014-10-05 09:25 AM


Rustling the trees a bit
I'm aware of its potency
as it takes on this new season

the gold is real pretty
as it adheres to the leaf
(for now)

and my heart feels the significance
as you enter it

knowing that I am at a loss
to protect you
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2014-10-05 09:27 AM

Emma
Your tender heart always shines through in your writing making it a joy to read.

Lori
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-10-05 09:49 AM

Wordplay coming from you more often than not, gives us a zinger ending. This write confirms that.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2014-10-06 01:37 PM

This is so beautifully expressed and its deep melancholy makes me gasp.

Dear Emma, I hope your cat will be back home quickly.

Love and hugs.

Margherita
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
4 posted 2014-10-06 02:23 PM

so finely emotive and well said !
Redstart
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since 2014-05-16
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5 posted 2014-10-06 04:37 PM

Autumn is the season of passing on, to more than past loves. It is a new beginning. Death and re-birth.
EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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Midwest
6 posted 2014-10-06 10:27 PM

thanks for the good thoughts; kitty is gone a few days, hoping he returns
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
7 posted 2014-10-07 12:33 PM

Tears for your anguish Emma.  I feel it for you too.  Praying that your kitty comes home safe and sound.  Please let us know when that happens.

Owl
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