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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-11-27 08:09 PM

when the stars are out
a strong sense of timelessness
enters into my thoughts
I feel we are like the stars
lost in emptiness
incapable of fathoming
all I know
ahhh . . . let the stars shine
let the wine flow
my cheap California burgundy is speculative
seeking my inter sanctum

©November 23, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (11-27-2014 10:11 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-11-27 10:02 PM

Stars, wine and time to ponder...

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-11-27 10:09 PM

Yup. You got it Lori, my friend. Thank you.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2014-11-28 12:57 PM

stars and wine, a lovely share and a deep philosophy,

yann

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2014-11-28 07:33 AM

Hello Yann, thank you.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2014-12-01 02:56 PM

Nice, Jerry.
Keep up the great writing.

Enjoyed.

JL

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2014-12-01 03:13 PM

Thank you JL, I appreciate your thoughts.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

7 posted 2014-12-07 04:22 PM

let the wine flow indeed
and why not?
stars wine the imagination is stirred

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2014-12-07 04:26 PM

Ahhh . . . Emma, how right you are . . .

Dammit I'm Mad is Dammit I'm Mad spelled backward.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2014-12-11 12:48 PM

Thought I had commented on this long ago, but no me on here yet .... so,

A great piece of deep contemplation - made me think of my Navy days in So. Calif, laying on the beach at night rather than returning to the ship to sleep and, and . . . yeah, deep contemplation.

Great piece.

j.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2014-12-11 06:53 AM

Better late than never, they say . . . Thank you for your very nice comments, Jimmy.

Dammit I'm Mad is Dammit I'm Mad spelled backward.

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