Dances with clouds - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #49

Dances with clouds

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2015-01-17 08:54 PM

water glides lazily down the lake
babbling like a child playing in the sun
the air turns cold and water shivers with the chill
it can stand the cold no longer, it rises and
lands itself in a vapor heaven.

water spirit finds shelter in the vapor,
now she's a nymph in search of fun
joins with the dust and debris from the earth
flying in aimless abandon
up in the sky where the air is frigid

vapor nymph meets other nymphs
they dance free-floating in space
soar like an angel's song beyond the atmosphere
their flight suspended above the planets
to form into thin layers of clouds.

clouds thicken into masses of tower clouds
break up in spraying falls spawned by rain.
water spirit goes back home to the lake.

[This message has been edited by jjote (01-19-2015 10:54 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2015-01-18 12:31 PM

Wonderful, dear Josefina. Such an inspired interpretation of your observation of nature's spectacle.

Love,
Margherita

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2015-01-19 01:35 PM

thanks margherita for stopping by.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2015-01-24 07:03 PM

nice...james

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.