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Open Poetry #49

Tomorrow

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2015-02-20 02:20 PM

Tomorrow rests in your eyes
tenderly waiting for me
with your affection.
You capture my likeness in love.
Tomorrow transcends tomorrow.
I am timeless in your eyes.

LGR©2/20/15

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-02-20 03:00 PM

Hopelessly and fervently are these words of love.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2015-02-20 03:19 PM

Yes they are. I don't know that I succeded in conveying what I intended-that when you love someone you don't really see them anymore, you see how you feel about them. ~L

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2015-02-20 06:07 PM

Oh hell, Lori, I'm good at missing the point. Sorry.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2015-02-20 06:27 PM

I did not mean to imply you missed the point. I even agreed with your comment. No apology needed. ~L

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2015-02-23 08:20 PM

nice....james

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2015-02-23 09:12 PM

Thanks James! ~L

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

7 posted 2015-02-24 05:49 AM

divine! xx

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2015-02-24 06:31 PM

Thanks Traci for the mega complement!!! I'm at a loss for words.

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