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Moses and the caravan
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Moses and the caravan |
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rex king New Member Posts 7 |
As Moses dwelt at the backside of the desert with his wife and their children , every evening around sundown he noticed a caravan coming from the other direction going back toward pharaohs palace. Always at the same Time and what really bothered Moses is he noticed it as it was going past, seeing the rear. Moses asked GOD of this...God said "son , In Egypt you were a mighty a man revered and worshiped as a God , yet I called you here and sent that caravan past you at that time....it was and is to show you who I AM, and what you truly were and , truth known still are , although you ate still my chosen. Do you understand now son?" Moses said yes Lord. God said GO TELL PHAROAH LET MY PEOPLE GO! |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
no, the meaning of this one evaded me. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Me too, and think it should be in the "prose" section or re-structured to, at the least, resemble, free verse. j. |
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