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Open Poetry #49

Fire and Moonlight

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2015-03-06 09:02 AM

   Fire and Moonlight

In these 'endless' hills,
ever more beautiful as
  deeply traveled,
the morning star
dances  through
swirling mist and
mossy forest calm
to the grand-eternal
music of the dawn.
Here, beyond all
the noise and silent
desperation of
the ever-grasping
world of men,
I dream only
to ask of  life,
as  light vanishes
into light and
shadows into
darkness, that
I be consumed
in an eternal love
that burns like fire
and moonlight.

                     --- b. e. adams (3/6/2015)

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2015-03-06 10:56 AM

i loved the scheme of the movie, between life and death, thoughts are deep and work, thanks

yann

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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2 posted 2015-03-06 02:42 PM

thanks Yann !

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2015-03-06 06:21 PM

The dancing star conjures up so many magical images.
Another beauty DP.

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2015-03-06 07:35 PM

This one is rich with meaning and image. Nicely done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2015-03-06 09:10 PM

thanks so much to both of you!!

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