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never leave me alone..
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never leave me alone.. |
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thimothi New Member Posts 7 india |
You bid me Good Bye And walked away.. Leaving me behind..... I couldn't utter a word..... All i could do was To shed some tears.. Each drop yelled "Never leave me alone" Drops were fleeting But not my yelling.. For it still continues...... |
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Vincent Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 52 |
sometimes inside says what we can`t, what we wished we had. short and to the point, my kind of read. good work. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Welcome to PiP, thimothi . . . Your first poem I liked very much. Yes . . . Even when the teardrops stop falling, the yelling can, and sometimes does, keeps on keeping on. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I like this very much as well! The ending has a haunting to it. Well done! ~L |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry! Please check your email for a Very Special Welcome! "The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
The pile of ash where your heart used to be will continue to smolder until a new seed is planted in its sted... Then, wonderful experiences begin to grow once more. Welcome to Passions |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice writing about only having control over our own choices...james |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
very interesting way to look at it. the power of those tears is multidirectional. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Being "left" is always tough, my friend . . . but think positive . . . think of the world to come... and it will, j. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very nice feelings, loved it yann |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This leave quite the echo m'friend, well done  "..But a tyrant spell has bound me, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
rejection is a hard animal to face...james |
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thimothi New Member Posts 7 india |
thanks a lot |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hi Timothi, enjoyed this read Thanks so much for sharing. |
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