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Affair Afar
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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 Have I ever told you that you, are my faith That you are the only truth I propose to Your eyes are my church And your lips, my shrine Ever adjoining your kiss, with thine Fate finished distance for us to survive A dream that will never know one day alive So let us become on the edge of our smiles Pressing together the width of our miles Let the word fall, with tears on your breast Let my mouth trace all the love, I confess Your soul is my heaven Your spirit, my prayer These words trapped, forever In our poetry, affair  [This message has been edited by Richy (02-06-2014 11:08 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So many great lines and so deeply felt. This is by far my fav from you. Your heart is showing Mr..and its looking mighty fine. .  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
haha Lori you have a way of making me laugh and smile at the same time.. and thats a good thing.. ever inspiring is your spirit  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
How blessed is the woman whose man writes poetry? This is sooo romantic Richy. You got your your mushy stuff in all the right places! Lori |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you Lori G what a nice thing to say.. If we are who we know then all we do, comes from them.. Thank all of you for being my pen.. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
It certainly is a romantic write, Richy. You are good at them but this - "A dream that will never know one day alive" is so sad. I used to dream those dreams myself until I realized that I needed rather to focus on reality. I miss them. |
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