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Open Poetry #49
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OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
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Pearl city Iowa
0 posted 2015-07-07 05:03 AM


Jasmine came on sultry moon,
entwined the minarets in bloom,
against bejeweled velvet sky,
a murmured sweet sirocco sigh,
brushed my lips with heady scent,
'til cried my broken heart..."relent !"

Is this heaven?

shoeless Joe Jackson.
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2015-07-07 09:26 AM

Ahhh . . . Enough is enough already is this poems sad lament . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~
OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
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Pearl city Iowa
2 posted 2015-07-07 05:54 PM

Thank you for your kind reply
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2015-07-09 04:44 PM

enjoyed...james
jjote
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Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2015-07-09 08:48 PM

sweet though sad
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