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Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

0 posted 2015-10-26 05:16 PM

Crisp and clear each note rings
of this lovers waltz we hear

From across the great hall
we make our way to one another

With an ever so subtle smile
you reach out your hand

I draw it to my lips and place
my arm slowly about your waist

We begin to move together and without so much
as a flutter, our eyes become full with each others presence

'I am yours and you are mine' they seem to say
for whatever time we have together

Just us two alone with no thoughts past ourselves,
flowing through flood rushes of warm emotions

Then, all too soon, the music draws down and begins to fade away
And as it does you begin to fade away along with it

...until I can see you no more

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-10-26 06:59 PM

Ahhh . . . Still, there is that memory to give you pleasure for days, weeks, etc . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

2 posted 2015-10-26 11:40 PM

Thanks JerryPat.

Isn't it amazing that in quiet moments we can recall ten minutes out of 45 years or more?

There is a God.

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2015-10-27 06:22 AM

You captured the memory like a photograph...~L

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2015-11-12 09:42 PM

enjoyed reading this...james

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2015-11-12 09:54 PM

I think I've written of a waltz or two. This is lovely.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2015-11-14 09:44 AM

Music allows us to experience emotions that are forever stored along with the tunes, that stirred our heart. And Waltz is perfect for this "purpose".

Very nicely expressed, dear Ticklefingers.

Margherita

Namyh
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since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

7 posted 2015-11-14 04:15 PM

Ticklefingers - If you can recall ten minutes out of 45 years, wait 'til you get to 80. Whoa! Then you'll also know there is a God 'cause he'll be the one smiling at ya. LOL. Most enjoyed your work Ticklefingers.

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