I got a surprise for you know who babe

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Open Poetry #49

I got a surprise for you know who babe

DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

0 posted 2015-11-15 10:11 PM

there's a personal gift in this box babe
for nobody else but you
I thought about us a lot babe
and this I've decided to do

I'll walk my walk before you babe
I'm through with following you
I've heard all the talk in talkin' babe
I've heard it all from you

so follow your heart to your hell babe
it's a trail that runs wild and free
but when you're ready to surrender it all babe
use this gift when you're lookin' for me

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2015-11-16 08:42 PM

nice writing...james

Mr Martini
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Posts 366
Beneath The Line

2 posted 2015-11-17 03:07 AM

"so follow your heart to your hell babe
it's a trail that runs wild and free"

At first I thought you were writing to Bob Dylan love, but after a few re-reads and a few well soaked olives, I finally figured out it was me. That's the same follow ~hic-cup~ I trailed alright.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

jjote
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since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2015-11-17 11:45 AM

I'm wondering what's in the box..but good for you, you stopped following her, leaving it to her to follow you

Constance
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since 2001-07-28

Posts 393
Ohio

4 posted 2015-11-17 05:44 PM

Well, well! I'm wondering if it's a gun in the box! I like this- and the mystery of it.

Smiles,
Constance

DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

5 posted 2015-11-17 11:17 PM

Thanks y'all and hey jjote! I'm a chick, chick! So y'all wanna know what's in the box do ya? Well y'all just gonna have to ask you-know-who!

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

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